tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post7798634738684948923..comments2023-09-26T22:36:49.178+08:00Comments on Ceritaku ^_^: CERPEN PENDEK : LELAKI YANG DIBENCIRia Natsumihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02983982329539654732noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-46061846247570282442017-09-27T04:40:36.938+08:002017-09-27T04:40:36.938+08:00Best sgt..but I expect more from you..BTW suke Sgt...Best sgt..but I expect more from you..BTW suke Sgt novel suami vampire..goshh susah nk caring novel tu sekarang..anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09161737292636395900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-25986908809830778742014-12-22T18:48:20.949+08:002014-12-22T18:48:20.949+08:00boleh tak ajar cara nak buat blog macam ni?
boleh tak ajar cara nak buat blog macam ni?<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00778664613571526130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-70250943898855216822014-09-21T18:24:35.594+08:002014-09-21T18:24:35.594+08:00ya akak faham lewah2 ni sebab ada belajar masa F6 ...ya akak faham lewah2 ni sebab ada belajar masa F6 dulu hahahha tapi ada sesetengah pembaca tak faham..terpaksalah akak tulis cerpen pendek...tapi utk pengetahuan huda, ada cerpen panjang...so, bagi akak cerpen ni maksudnya penceritaan yang sudah ada penamatnya...cuma ada penulis buat pendek dan panjang sahaja...Ria Natsumihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02983982329539654732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-16054621287377693962014-09-21T18:22:09.953+08:002014-09-21T18:22:09.953+08:00maaf jika bosan....boring dan tak best...saya cuba...maaf jika bosan....boring dan tak best...saya cuba utk menulis yang terbaik tetapi ketika ini itu sahaja level saya mampu buat...maaf...Ria Natsumihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02983982329539654732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-5745129229633418242014-09-16T17:46:44.335+08:002014-09-16T17:46:44.335+08:00betol..betol..betol...¡¡betol..betol..betol...¡¡Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-39206568288874146962014-09-16T17:45:10.543+08:002014-09-16T17:45:10.543+08:00boringggggg....boringggggg....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-30767389727020580432014-07-31T15:22:04.823+08:002014-07-31T15:22:04.823+08:00Starting mcm layan .. Pastu kelautStarting mcm layan .. Pastu kelautAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-22618398088165270702014-05-22T00:17:48.655+08:002014-05-22T00:17:48.655+08:00saya sokong semua komen diatas :-)saya sokong semua komen diatas :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-4496991911762114492014-02-08T08:53:27.834+08:002014-02-08T08:53:27.834+08:00Apabila Kak Ria dah gunakan perkataan cerpen, tak ...Apabila Kak Ria dah gunakan perkataan cerpen, tak perlulah gunakan perkataan pendek lagi sebab cerpen tu dah merangkumi cerita pendek. Kalau cerpen pendek jadilah ia cerita pendek pendek. Jadi lewah walaupun objektif adalah untuk memaksudkan bahawa cerita ini pendek sahaja.hudadinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14925326903583065065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-41063010997322616392014-01-26T19:29:00.211+08:002014-01-26T19:29:00.211+08:00Maaf...scene nk uji zakhri sayang ke tidak kat he...Maaf...scene nk uji zakhri sayang ke tidak kat heroin tu mcm tak sesuai. Mcm heroin Ada masalah mental. Mgkin jgak sbab susunan ayat. Klu bleh Cbe Cari idea lain. Yg out of the box tpi relevant. Just opinion.peace !!!Nooraihashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04824367770133984024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-16595398437142289502013-12-29T20:52:30.694+08:002013-12-29T20:52:30.694+08:00Why Zakhri Adha Zafran? Teringat kat Ayie dalam ti...Why Zakhri Adha Zafran? Teringat kat Ayie dalam tiba2 dia ada.... Ayie yg cute gilossss...<br />Seriesliiii... Lain sangat zakhri adha yg ini dengan zakhri yang satu lagiii... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-3002790931051941582013-05-18T11:08:41.258+08:002013-05-18T11:08:41.258+08:00menarik n bestmenarik n bestNuruSyahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13607812835478360113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-18979629232063219392013-05-12T22:28:06.246+08:002013-05-12T22:28:06.246+08:00best..tp singkat sangat cerita...
best..tp singkat sangat cerita...<br />Sedingin Mint'https://www.blogger.com/profile/15545161454416544524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-40803473498530670622013-05-12T18:51:37.072+08:002013-05-12T18:51:37.072+08:00bestlah cerpen ni...bestlah cerpen ni...Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09292688707092616160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-26973529821679284462013-05-02T00:52:54.873+08:002013-05-02T00:52:54.873+08:00bolelah 3 bintangbolelah 3 bintangAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16628805458000783371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-38961335225965375472013-04-15T11:57:47.991+08:002013-04-15T11:57:47.991+08:00Takde cabaran langsung dalam citer ni. Memang mena...Takde cabaran langsung dalam citer ni. Memang menarik, tpi buatlah part sedih sikit.. Bru lah ade jiwa.. Ni mcm citer nak abis cepat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-40071001773919595482013-02-21T18:57:14.811+08:002013-02-21T18:57:14.811+08:00best ! best ape pndk , malas nak bace panjang2 .best ! best ape pndk , malas nak bace panjang2 .Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-12152471778847624902012-12-10T15:20:26.605+08:002012-12-10T15:20:26.605+08:00pendek sangatlah
walau bagaimanapon tetap bestpendek sangatlah<br />walau bagaimanapon tetap bestAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-27467570921739037312012-11-29T18:51:22.100+08:002012-11-29T18:51:22.100+08:00best even pendek :Dbest even pendek :Dfayznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-12589673643228161712012-11-22T21:20:11.134+08:002012-11-22T21:20:11.134+08:00Tula citer ni kontot sgt. Citer ni ble diolah dgn ...Tula citer ni kontot sgt. Citer ni ble diolah dgn lebey menarik lg jija dipjgkan sikit. Jln citer dan susunan ayat haruslah tidak terlalu keanak2 kanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-89453338057241315292012-11-14T08:52:34.244+08:002012-11-14T08:52:34.244+08:00Ria, cter ok, tp ada typing error sikit..
contoh ...Ria, cter ok, tp ada typing error sikit.. <br />contoh : <br />1. melayan nyawa sepatutnye melayang nyawa..<br />2. "abang rela kau kena tikam dengan Aris" sepatutnye "abang rela kalau kena tikam dengan Aris"<br />Eddayuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06392837938585031833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-3178470047731965802012-11-13T22:52:48.650+08:002012-11-13T22:52:48.650+08:00walaupun ni cerpen tapi jangan la pendek sgt...
se...walaupun ni cerpen tapi jangan la pendek sgt...<br />semua macam mendadak je...<br />x sempat nk rasa saspen dh peleraian...<br />dh abis pon<br /><br />sorry kalo x setujuAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00231840495098481856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-64173535775365865072012-11-13T21:12:18.069+08:002012-11-13T21:12:18.069+08:00Pendek...
Tapi nasib ni cerpen je...
Tp menarik..Pendek...<br />Tapi nasib ni cerpen je...<br />Tp menarik..Eppy Safrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09741308929363665049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-59523023562591451732012-11-13T18:15:37.865+08:002012-11-13T18:15:37.865+08:00isi ok..
cuma pengolahan dia macam kelam kabut sik...isi ok..<br />cuma pengolahan dia macam kelam kabut sikit<br /><br />anyway, nice try<br />keep on writingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2643850571408277889.post-5213938006206197652012-11-13T13:55:20.620+08:002012-11-13T13:55:20.620+08:00best gilabest gilaRuunna Qizbalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10434575572590894791noreply@blogger.com